Monday, January 26, 2015

Cold Supper





Cold Supper

Supper is not poisoned peanuts or fat cats
It is not a lazy potato. This supper would 
CRASH

But it is frozen carbon tater tots 
         and chilled twilight dogs
with a hint of peppered
         half - shaven superheroes

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6 comments:

  1. SimonJanuary 27, 2015 at 7:45 AM

    I like how you used the word CRASH!

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  2. Micah's WritingsJanuary 27, 2015 at 7:55 AM

    I like that you used crash and had good line spacing.

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  3. Kelly BulthuisJanuary 27, 2015 at 10:13 AM

    I like how you sort of made your own recipe.

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  4. MasonTheCamelToSaveTheWorldFromSpidermanAndToSaveHumanity.No one can save Spooderman acept Spooderman--MasonJamesBeekmanJanuary 27, 2015 at 2:10 PM

    It doesn't make any sense to the point it makes so much sense. Very well done to the done.

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 27, 2015 at 6:27 PM

    Good line spacing and use of words

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 28, 2015 at 10:47 AM

    i think you spelled with wrong? i like your line spacing and the title

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